2023年10月7日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：是否应该禁止在公共场所，如图书馆、商店和公共交通工具上使用手机范文，供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that the use of mobiles (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries, shops and on public transport. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

科技类

【题目解析】

题目大意：一些人认为手机在例如图书馆、商店和公共交通等公共场合应当被禁用。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这个观点

【思路分析】本题考查手机在公共场合的使用问题。注意在谈论这个题目的时候不能将题目等同于谈论手机的好与坏。很多同学看到手机和互联网的话题就会立刻开始论述二者的好坏而不顾题目限定的范围。

手机在公共场合应当禁止方面，可以考虑到声音太大，打扰他人这一点。

不应被禁止的论点可以想到手机是人们保持联系的重要工具，如果有紧急情况无法联系到可能会出现更多的问题。其次手机的功能不仅是通讯，还包括查询信息、支付、娱乐等，这些功能在公共场合也仍然是需要的。

【写作思路】

开头段：改写题目双方观点，表明自己的立场。

主体第一段：手机的即时通讯技能不应该被切断。

主体第二段：手机还有其他的功能，禁止使用将导致不便

主体第三段：确实会存在电话或铃声吵闹等问题。但是更有效的措施是制定规范和引导而不是全面禁止。

结尾段：虽然有一些缺点，但是公共场合禁止手机使用是不合理的

【参考范文】

Mobile phones have revolutionized the way we connect with one another, yet concerns have been raised about their appropriate use in public spaces such as libraries, shops, and public transport. While I acknowledge that phone usage in certain scenarios can be disruptive, I firmly believe that an outright ban is neither reasonable nor necessary.

Mobile phones, as the tool for instant communication, offer undeniable benefits in public spaces. They enable people to stay connected, be it for responding to an employer's call or accepting an invitation from a close friend. These connections often provide a sense of security, as they ensure individuals remain reachable and informed about important work or personal matters. Therefore, banning their use could sever these critical connections, with potentially dire consequences resulting from missed calls or messages from significant contacts.

Furthermore, considering the versatility and multifunctionality of mobile phones, a ban in public places would prove impractical. Mobile phones serve as more than mere communication devices; they facilitate payments, provide access to information, and offer entertainment options. Banning mobile phone use in such situations would undoubtedly lead to inconvenience, requiring individuals and organizations to adjust to a significant change that might not be well-received.

It is true that mobile phone usage in certain public settings like libraries, public transport or restaurants can cause disruptions. For instance, loud conversations or ringtones can disturb readers or passengers nearby, while the excessive use of mobile phones can also hinder face-to-face interaction. However, rather than implementing blanket bans, a more effective approach would involve clear guidelines and etiquette for mobile phone use such as designated “quiet zones”, signs that remind individuals to lower their voices or use headphones.

In conclusion, despite the potential drawbacks of mobile phone use in public places, I contend that an outright ban is not the solution. Instead, a more balanced approach involving clear guidance and regulation is needed to ensure that mobile phones use without causing significant disruptions.

(323 words)

【语言积累】

revolutionize 彻底改变

scenario 情况，设想的情景

disruptive 引起混乱的

disruption 扰乱，中断

outright 完全的，彻底的

instant communication 即时通讯

sever 切断，切割

dire consequence 极其严重的后果

versatility 多功能性，多才多艺

multifunctionality 多功能性

impractical 不切实际的

facilitate 使…更容易发生，促进…的发生

well-received 受到欢迎的

ringtone 铃声

hinder 阻碍

implement 实施

etiquette 礼节，规矩

designated 指定的，标出的

blanket bans 全面的禁止

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