2023年9月9日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作小作文：美国一家百货商店一年内一些商品销售额的变化情况范文，供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》9月9日雅思小作文回忆:美国一商店一年内商品销售额变化。

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【写作思路】

总起段：该图表提供了一家美国百货商店一年内一些商品销售额的信息。

综述段：总体而言，所有类别都经历了上升的趋势，尽管幅度有很大差异。

主体段1：女装在整个年份内始终是最畅销的商品。秋季的销售额最高，达到了最高点110,000美元。这标志着与前一个冬季季节的销售额40,000美元相比的持续增长。珠宝的销售增长排名第二，从冬季和春季的最不受欢迎（低于20,000美元）开始，但在秋季上升至第二高位（50,000美元）。

主体段2：相比之下，化妆品和运动器材的增长较小，分别增加了17,000美元和10,000美元。这两个类别也都经历了暂时的下降，化妆品在春季达到了20,000美元的低点，运动器材在夏季达到了23,000美元的低点。尽管季节销售额在秋季之前在20,000美元至40,000美元之间波动，男装类别的总体变化最小，仅增加了2,000美元。

【参考范文】

The chart provides information about how large the sales figures for some items were in an American department store over a year.

Overall, all the categories experienced upward trends, although the extents varied significantly. 

Women's clothes consistently remained the best-sellers throughout the year. The autumn season saw the highest sales for this category, reaching a peak at 110,000 dollars. This marked a consistent increase from the previous winter season, which recorded sales of 40,000 dollars. Jewellery experienced the second-largest sales growth, starting from being the least popular (below 20,000 dollars) during winter and spring, but rising to the second-highest rank (50,000 dollars) in autumn.

In contrast, cosmetics and sports equipment saw smaller increases of 17,000 and 10,000 dollars respectively. Both categories also experienced temporary declines, with cosmetics reaching a low of 20,000 dollars in spring and sports equipment reaching 23,000 dollars in summer. The smallest overall change, a mere 2,000-dollar rise, was observed in the men's clothing category, despite the seasonal sales fluctuating between 20,000 and 40,000 dollars prior to autumn.

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【语言积累】

1.experience upward trends 经历上升趋势

2.vary 各有不同；有大差异

3.best-sellers最热销商品

4.reach a peak 达到顶峰

5.mark a consistent increase 标志持续增长

6.the second-highest rank 第二高位

7.respectively 分别地

8.temporary declines 短暂的下降

9.reach a low 达到低谷

10.fluctuate 波动

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