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6月3日雅思表格图范文:在四个行业的男女雇佣情况

2023.06.27 17:45

2023年6月3日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作小作文:在四个行业的男女雇佣情况范文,供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

表格

【题目解析】

表格涉及到多种维度的数据对比、变化,需要仔细观察并找到其中的规律;建议按照就业的领域来分组描写。

【写作思路】

开头段:转述题目

主体段:分两个小段落,分别对比就业比例差别较大的制造和教育领域,以及其他领域。

总结:在所统计的4个领域中,制造领域的就业比例有明显的减少,其他领域变化不大,虽然在教育领域中,女性的就业比例明显大于男性。

【参考范文】: 

The table illustrates the percentages of male and female employment across four sectors: catering, banking, manufacturing industry, and education, during the years 1986, 1996, and 2006.

Within the manufacturing industry, male employment started at a relatively high level of 32% in 1986 but declined to 21% in 1996 and further dropped to 17% in 2006. Women’s participation in this field was consistently lower than men, with a continuous fall from 18% to 6% during the same period. By contrast, in the education sector, female employment was reported to be significantly higher than male, with figures of 33%, 35%, and 38% for the respective years. Male employment remained relatively low in this area, ranging from 13% to 15% across the three years. 

In the catering sector, women consistently represented a slightly higher proportion, maintaining a steady 26% throughout the years, while male employment started at 16% in 1986 and rose marginally to 22% in both 1996 and 2006. For the banking industry, both male and female employment experienced substantial growth. The proportion of men employed in this field rose from 11% in 1986 to 20% in 1996, reaching 21% in 2006. Women's participation increased by 7% throughout the two decades. 

Overall, manufacturing industry saw the greatest decline in employment rates, while women dominated education sector. 

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【语言积累】

sector 部门,部分

a relatively high level 一个相对高的水平

a continuous fall 持续的下降

consistently adv. 持续,一直

significantly higher than 比…高很多

for the respective years 在对应的这几年

maintain a steady … throughout the years 在这些年都保持在…(数据)

experienced substantial growth 经历了显著的增长

saw the greatest decline 经历最大的下滑

dominate v. 在…占据主要地位

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