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4月29日雅思柱状图范文:4个国家留学欧洲某国家的人数变化

2023.05.18 14:02

2023年4月29日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:4个国家留学欧洲某国家的人数变化范文,供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

柱状图

【题目解析】

图中说明的是来自四个国家的某大学的申请者的变化情况。图中信息比较容易识别,写作思路可以根据数量等级进行分组

【写作思路】

开头段:转述题目

总结:中国经历了下降并被美国所超过。俄罗斯以及日本的申请者数量虽有上升,但是总量仍然显著低于其他两个国家。

主体段1: 中国起初的申请者数量是最高的,但是持续下降。美国起初排名第二,并且不断上升,在2007年超过中国。

主体段2:日本和俄罗斯的申请者数量也增加,但是数值整体较低

【参考范文】: 

The given bar chart illustrates the number of applicants from four different countries who applied to a European university between 2004 and 2008. 

Overall, the chart clearly indicates that China's dominance as the largest applicant pool for the European university declined over the five-year period and was eventually overtaken by the United States. Despite an increase, the number of students from Japan and Russia were significantly lower than the other two.

In 2004, China had the highest number of applicants, with nearly 30,000 students applying to the European university. However, this number decreased steadily over the next five years, reaching just 18,000 by 2008. In contrast, the United States, which ranked second in 2004, saw a consistent increase and surpassed China in 2007, rising to almost 30,000 by the end.

Japan and Russia also experienced an increase in the number of applicants, but the figures were much lower compared to the aforementioned countries. Specifically, the figure for Japan nearly doubled, rising to approximately 15,000, while that from Russia tripled, reaching about 7,000 in 2008.

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【单词积累】

applicant 申请者

dominance 支配地位,影响力

overtake 超过

surpass 超过

consistent 连续的,持续的

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