2023年4月1日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：澳大利亚某地五种职业在2001,2008年从事人数对比范文，供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》4月1日雅思写作task1回忆:五种职业在2001,2008年从事人数对比。

【图形分类】

柱状动态图

【题目解析】

题目大意：图表展示了2001年-2008年在澳大利亚某一个地方从事五个领域工作的人数变化情况。

这个题目有两个时间，同时也只有两种趋势，上升（sales，computing和nursing）和下降（accounting和farming）；考生可以采用两种分组（分段）方式，1）2001（按照静态图方式描写2001年数据）+2008（描写上升/下降两种趋势），2）按照趋势（上升/下降）。

范文笔者采用第二种“按趋势”的分组方式。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写+概述

Para 2 = sales，computing和nursing的数据

Para 3 = accounting和farming的数据

【参考范文】

The bar chart illustrates how many people worked in different sectors in a particular Australian area in two separate years: 2001 and 2008. Overall, by far the most individuals were employees in the sales industry while the fewest worked in the farming area.

In terms of sales, approximately 155,000 and around 165,000 people worked as a sales representative in 2001 and 2008 respectively. Although the numbers of those employed in the computing and nursing industries were similar initially, at roughly 55,000, yet while the figure for those employed in the nursing sector saw a moderate growth to about 57,500 in 2008, that for those with a computing position rose significantly, reaching just under 80,000 in the end.

Regarding the other two types of work, there were more than 60,000 accountants in 2001, and the number was considerately higher than that of farmers, at about 25,000. However, fewer people had been recruited in these two areas by 2008, and the figure was nearly 60,000 for accounting and almost 20,000 for farming.  

(170 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.sector (n.) 领域

2.by far 用于修饰形容词最高级，表示强调

3.employee (n.) 雇员

4.industry (n.) 领域

5.area (n.) 领域

6.sales representative 销售代表

7.roughly (adv.) 大约

8.a moderate growth 轻微增长

9.accountant (n.) 会计

10.recruit (v.) 雇佣