2023.04.24 16:42
2023年4月8日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:1998-2008工程公司的员工学历比例对比范文,供雅思考生参考。
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【图形分类】
饼图
【题目解析】
第一张饼图展示了1998年某工程公司的人员学历和专业比例,第二张图展示了2008年各部分比例的变化。
【写作思路】
开头段:这两个饼状图展示了1998年和2008年某工程企业员工的学历情况。
概述段:总的来说,在十年的时间里,该公司雇佣了更多的专家,主要是博士学位。
主体段一:1998年,大多数员工拥有学士学位,其中19%的人拥有理科学位,25%的人拥有文科学位,占员工总数的近一半。虽然29%的员工拥有理科硕士学位,但只有12%的员工拥有文科硕士学位。然而,只有一小部分员工拥有博士学位,其中13%的人拥有理科博士学位,只有2%的人拥有文科博士学位。
主体段二:相比之下,2008年同一家公司员工的资质发生了重大变化。最值得注意的区别是理学博士的比例大幅增加,上升到30%,构成了劳动力的大部分。同样,拥有博士学位、主修文科的人数也有所增加,从2%上升到7%。另一方面,在这两个专业中拥有学士学位的员工比例下降到10%(理科)和11%(文科)。不过,拥有硕士学位的员工比例几乎没有变化。
【参考范文】
The two pie charts illustrate the educational qualifications of employees at an engineering enterprise in 1998 and 2008.
Overall, over the course of a decade, the company hired a greater number of specialists, primarily those with a PhD degree.
In 1998, the majority of employees held a bachelor’s degree, with 19% in science and 25% in arts, accounting for nearly half of the total workforce. While 29% of the employees had a master's degree in science, only 12% held a master's degree in arts. However, only a small percentage of employees had a PhD degree, with 13% in science and mere 2% in arts.
In contrast, there was a considerable shift in the qualifications of the staff at the same company in 2008. The most noteworthy difference was the substantial increase in the percentage of PhD scientists, which rose to 30% and constituted the majority of the workforce. Similarly, there was also an increase in the number of people majoring in arts with a doctorate, rising from 2% to 7%. The proportion of employees with a first degree in either of these two majors, on the other hand, decreased to 10% (science) and 11% (arts). The figure for employees with a master's degree saw a little change, though.
(208 words)
【语言积累】
1.over the course of a decade 在十年的时间里
2.specialist 专家
3.employed candidates 录用的候选人
4.bachelor’s degree 学士学位
5.mere 只有
6.a considerable shift 相当大的转变
7.the most noteworthy difference 最值得注意的区别
8.doctorate 博士学位
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