新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之学习商业比历史对社会更有益，供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that there could be more benefit to society if more people studied business than history. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

这是一道典型的同意与否类型的议论文写作，有些人认为如果更多的人学习商业而不是历史，这将会对社会有更多的好处。题目审题比较容易，同学们可以采用一边倒，让步转折或者折中观点的方式来进行论述，在主体段落中重点说明学习商业或者学习历史对社会的好处即可。这个题目容易跑题是因为有的同学只是说明学习商业或历史的好处，但没有和对社会的好处相联系。

【写作思路】

开头段：      改写题目+自己观点  

主体第一段：  具体论述学习商业对于社会的好处

主体第二段：  具体论述学习历史对于社会的好处

结尾段：      总结自己的观点+简单解释说明 

【参考范文】

We live in a golden age that empowers people to choose subjects in different educational institutions and search for information on nearly any imaginable topic. Some people argue that studying business can benefit society more than learning history, while I believe both subjects are equally important and should be placed in equal measure.

Business study can be beneficial to society in several ways. For one thing, it helps to create a more efficient and productive workforce. Business learners equipped with core skills in managing resources and personnel can bring increased productivity and profitability not only in infrastructures such as roads and railways but also in health facilities, shopping centers, and other public and private services. Additionally, learning business contributes to promoting economic development. Those who have studied business are more likely to start and run a successful business, which results in a more entrepreneurial culture to motivate the emergence of other businesses and a high level of employment rate.

On the other hand, studying history allows us to observe and understand how societies behaved. The historical data used to create laws or systems helps us to make proper decisions that create promising future for our societies. An illustration of this is that many countries evaluate national economies or wars by analyzing historical events. Moreover, learning history fosters a sense of identity and belonging. What our ancestors believed and how they fitted into society often reflects our own beliefs and conventions. Therefore, history allows us to understand our cultural heritage and facilitates a more cohesive and harmonious society. 

In conclusion, both subjects should be equally prioritized to ensure the best possible outcome. Business study helps create a more productive workforce and prosperous economy while learning history develops our understanding of the past and establishes our identity.

(295 words)

【语言积累】

1.empower 赋予

2.be beneficial to 对…有益处

3.productive workforce 有成效的生产力

4.be equipped with 配备…

5.core skills 核心技能

6.profitability 盈利能力

7.motivate the emergence of 促使…的出现

8.make proper decisions 做出正确决定

9.foster a sense of identity and belonging 培养认同感和归属感

10.cultural heritage 文化遗产

11.facilitate 促进