2023.02.26 02:04
2023年1月28日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:4个年龄段人群去健身次数变化范文,供雅思考生参考。
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【图形分类】
线形图
【题目解析】
线形图展示了1990年至2010年四种不同年龄段的欧洲人每月去一次及一次以上健身房的信息。通过图表可以看出,这四种年龄段在这20年里整体呈现上升趋势,其中18-24岁和25-34岁的去健身房的人占比明显要高于35-44和45岁以上人群。所以,这幅线形图可以分为两组,分别来描述他们的趋势变化。
【参考范文】
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Europeans who often visited gyms from 1990 to 2010 according to four age groups.
Overall, the percentages of people in all age groups demonstrated a growing trend during this period. While the 18 to 24 group experienced the most notable growth, the oldest group increased marginally.
In 1990, the figure for 25-34 age group started as the highest percentage among the four age groups, climbing rapidly from less than 10% to 50% in 2010. Similarly, the 18–24 age group was placed second at 8% in 1990 and skyrocketed to a peak of 58% in 2006, seven times greater than in 1990. However, the following years saw a slight dip of 5% in this figure in 2008 but eventually recovered to over 58% in 2010.
Regarding the two remaining groups, the proportion of 35-44 age range increased substantially from roughly 4% in 1990 to 40% in 2010. By contrast, the percentage of people aged 45 and above remained relatively unchanged, beginning with the lowest level among the four categories at around 3% and rising steadily to its maximum level of nearly 21% in 2010.
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【语言积累】
1.demonstrate a growing trend 显示出增长趋势
2.experience the most notable growth 经历最显著的成长
3.increase marginally 略微增加
4.start as the highest percentage 从百分比最高的开始
5.be placed second 排在第二
6.skyrocket to a peak of 飞升到顶峰
7.see a slight dip of 有轻微的下降
8.recover to 恢复到
9.increase substantially 大幅增加
10.remain relatively unchanged 保持相对不变
11.rise steadily to its maximum level of 稳定上升到的最大水平
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