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2022年11月26日雅思大作文范文:商品应该更耐用还是便宜

2022.12.15 15:22

2022年11月26日雅思写作考试已经结束啦,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:商品应该更耐用还是便宜范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making products cheap is more important.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意:有的人认为产品应该越耐用越好,而另一些人认为产品应该以便宜为主。

该题属于“讨论文”,故需要先讨论题目中两个观点的合理性,然后再给出自己的个人观点。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 文章概括 + 个人观点

Para 2 = 讨论题目中第一个观点的合理性

理由1:帮助人们节约钱

理由2:保护环境

Para 3 = 讨论题目在第二个观点的合理性

理由1:贫困家庭可以负担

理由2:人们可以很容易跟随潮流

Para 4 = 总结全文 + 个人观点

产品的质量和价格同等重要

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that the durability of goods is of considerable significance, while the opposing stance is that emphasis should be placed on low prices. This essay will initially analyse the two ideas, followed by a presentation of my perspective, which is that the quality and affordability of products are equally important.  

It is justified for some to favour products being manufactured as long-lasting. This is primarily because people can save a large amount of money. If consumers can use the products they have purchased for many years, it is unnecessary for them to spend money on the same product repeatedly. Instead, they can save the money or buy something else they need. In addition, the environment can be conserved. The shorter the life span of products, the more waste is generated, and then the disposal of these may contaminate the air and pollute waterways. However, when goods are made to be durable, this will be less likely to occur.

However, it is also true that the benefits of inexpensive goods are more obvious. To begin with, people from deprived families can afford what they intend to purchase more easily. For example, if their mattress is unusable and a new one is costly, they may not sleep soundly or have to buy a used one. In contrast, cheap but new products allow them to enjoy their life. Moreover, individuals are able to follow the latest trend. Once the price of commodities is low, the possibility increases that consumers become willing to be stylish, such as wearing the most fashionable clothes and shoes.

In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance, my firm opinion is that manufacturing both long-lasting and cheap products is vital. This can not only help people save money and have a better life but also protect the environment. Therefore, it is suggested that manufacturers produce high-quality and cheap goods.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.durability (n.) 耐用性

2.place emphasis on 重视

3.quality (n.) 质量

4.affordability (n.) 可负担

5.equally important 同等重要

6.manufacture (v.) 生产

7.long-lasting (adj.) 持久的

8.conserve the environment 保护环境

9.life span 生命时长

10.generate waste 产生垃圾

11.disposal of 丢弃

12.contaminate (v.) 污染

13.waterway (n.) 河道

14.durable (adj.) 耐用的

15.inexpensive (adj.) 便宜的

16.deprived families 贫困家庭

17.purchase (v.) 购买

18.costly (adj.) 昂贵的

19.sleep soundly 睡得好

20.commodity (n.) 商品

21.stylish (adj.) 时尚的

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