2022年8月20日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：英国三个年份的人口性别年龄占比范文，供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》8月20日雅思写作task1回忆:英国三个年份的人口性别年龄占比。

【图形分类】

动态表格

【题目解析】

这个题目描述了1911年，1961年和2011年英国的总人口以及15岁和75岁人口的比例和男女人口数据。

总的来说英国总人口上升；15岁人口比例下降，但是15岁男性人口上升，女性人口下降；75岁人口比例上升，同时两个性别的人口数也在上升。

这个题目乍一看比较复杂，但是可以很简单地分为三组，1）总人口，2）15岁人口，3）75岁人口。

这个题目需要使用过去时态。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写+概述

Para 2 = 描写英国总人口

Para 3 = 描写15岁人口数据

Para 4 = 描写75岁人口数据

【参考范文】

The table illustrates the total number of residents as well as the percentage of young and old people in Britain between 1911 and 2011. Overall, the total population in the UK rose noticeably; meanwhile, while the percentage of people aged 15 experienced a decline, that of elderly people saw the opposite trend; also, the change in the number of 15-year-old males and females was marginal, but that for senior citizens was significant. 

In terms of the total population, it was 36.1 million in 1911. After that, the figure increased markedly to 46.1 million in 1961 before continuing the trend to 56.1 million in 2011. 

Regarding people aged 15, this group accounted for 1.86% in 1911, with 334,200 males and 335,700 females respectively. During the following century, although the percentage decreased considerably to 1.23%, the number of males rose to 354,400 while that of females declined to 333,700. 

Turning to citizens aged 75, 0.23% of the British population in 1911 were from this group and then the proportion had more than tripled to 0.7% by 2011. While the number of males was 34,100 initially, jumping to 181,300 in 2011, the figure for females was 47,400 in 1911, soaring to 210,100 in the end. 

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.resident (n.) 居民

2.noticeably (n.) 明显地

3.experience a growth 上升

4.marginal (adj.) 轻微的

5.significant (adj.) 剧烈的

6.markedly (adv.) 明显地

7.account for 占据

8.considerably (adv.) 明显地

9.jump (v.) 剧烈上升

10.soar (v.) 剧烈上升