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2022年8月20日雅思大作文范文:年轻人用手机电脑交流影响读写

2022.08.24 17:31

2022年8月20日雅思写作考试已经结束啦,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:年轻人用手机电脑交流影响读写能力相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people say that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意:年轻人用手机和电脑交流会影响他们的读写能力。

这个题目属于“观点类”题型,要求考生表达是否同意的观点, 并写出程度。这类题型的观点可以是“totally agree/disagree”或“partly agree/disagree”。

本文笔者的观点是“完全赞同”,理由1)电子设备会直接帮助年轻人在交流时修改拼写和语法错误,2)年轻人在用电子设备交流时会使用非正式语言。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 个人观点 + 主要理由总结

Para 2 = 主体1

 理由1:电子设备会直接帮助年轻人在交流时修改拼写和语法错误

Para 3 = 主体2 

理由2:年轻人在用电子设备交流时会使用非正式语言

Para 4 = 总结段(重申观点+主体段理由总结)

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that young people’s literacy skills have been detrimentally impacted due to their excessive reliance on electronic communication. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because opportunities are seldom provided for them to correct their mistakes and their exposure to informal language is excessive. 

The primary reason supporting my stance is that young people are prevented from developing the ability to realise their spelling and grammatical mistakes. When they communicate via user-friendly devices, the advanced computer system will automatically give assistance by checking and correcting the mistakes made, resulting in these individuals never attaching importance to the errors at all. Thus, they will end up repeating the same mistakes and their reading and writing skills are threatened.

Another important point I consider relevant is that young people frequently use casual expressions on their computers and smart phones, including “CU29t”, “LoL” and “dunno”. Although this approach allows them to communicate with great convenience, they will gradually become accustomed to using these words. If they were required to generate some formal writing pieces, they would have difficulty accomplishing such tasks because of their inability to select appropriate vocabulary and sentence patterns.

In conclusion, I reiterated my complete approval of the idea that communication by using computers and mobiles poses a threat to young people’s writing and reading skills. For one thing, they do not know what spelling or grammar mistakes they are making and how to write appropriately. Therefore, it is suggested that the young not only enjoy the convenience brought by electronic communication but also spend time learning vocabulary and grammar rules as well as practising different writing genres.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.literacy skills 读写能力

2.be detrimentally impacted 被严重影响

3.excessive reliance on 过度依赖

4.electronic communication 电子交流

5.exposure to 接触

6.informal language 不规范语言 

7.excessive (adj.) 过度的

8.user-friendly devices 方便的设备

9.attach importance to 重视

10.casual expressions 非正式表达

11.become accustomed to 习惯

12.pose a threat to 对…不利

13.genre (n.) 文体

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