2022.07.29 21:20
2022年7月9日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:男女生在大学中全日制和半日制比例范文,供雅思考生参考。
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【题型分类】
静态柱图(多图)
【题目解析】
这个题目展示了2006年不同年龄的在澳大利亚兼职和全职学习的男女性比例。
题目中有两幅图,故主体段需要两段,分别描写两幅图的内容。有两种描写方法:1)按照part-time和full-time分组,2)按照年龄分组。
【写作思路】
Para 1 = 题目改写 + 概述
Para 2 = 描写第一幅图内容
Para 3 = 描写第二幅图内容
【参考范文】
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of males and females of various ages who received part-time and full-time education in Australia in 2016. Overall, regardless of gender, more students from 15-29 years old studied part-time while those aged 30 and over favoured full-time learning more, except for 25-29-year-old females who had an equal preference for the two modes.
Regarding males, the percentage of part-timers aged 20-24 was 40%, and the figure was over three times higher than that for their 15-19-year-old counterparts, at 12%. Students aged 25-29 and those aged no younger than 30 who studied part-time accounted for the same proportion, at 8%. In contrast, 12% of 20-24-year-old males studied full-time, followed by 10%, 8% and 6% for those over 29, between 15 and 19, and from 25-29 respectively.
Turning to females, 20-24-year-old part-timers represented the largest proportion, at 42%, which was significantly higher than that of teenagers, at 17%, and that of those aged 30 and over, at 6%. By comparison, there were 13% female students from the 20-24 age group and 12% from the 30+ year group studying full-time, while the figure for adolescents was 7%. Part-time and full-time students aged 25-29 constituted the same percentage, at 8%.
【亮点词汇及短语】
1.receive education 接受教育
2.regardless of gender 不管性别
3.favour (v.) 喜欢
4.full-time learning 全职学习
5.an equal preference for 同样喜爱
6.mode (n.) 模式
7.part-timer (n.) 兼职者
8.counterpart (n.) 对应的人/物
9.account for (v.) 占据
10.represent (v.) 占据
11.adolescent (n.) 青少年
12.constitute (v.) 占据
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