2022.07.05 15:45
2022年6月25日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:1990年及2010年广告公司职员学历背景范文,供雅思考生参考。
点击查看》》》6月25日雅思写作task1题目回忆:1990年及2010年广告公司职员学历背景。
【图形分类】
动态饼图
【题目解析】
两个饼图分别给出了在1990年和2010年该公司员工的学历情况。可以看出,在1990和2010年,拥有硕士学位的员工百分比都是最高的(29%+21%和29%+23%),并且数据的变化并不明显。拥有博士学位的员工在1990年只有13%(science)和2%(art),但是2010年出现Ph.D.-Science的百分比显著增加,Ph.D.-Art的百分比少量增加。这也说明肯定会出现First Degree拥有者比例的下降。
本题可以按照Master,Ph.D., First Degree这样三组进行描写,也可以按照先写1990年的情况,再写2010年的情况。
【写作思路】
开头段:转述题目
总结段:不管在哪一个学历水平,都是理科比例比文科比例更高(science与art之间的比较)。此外,在这20年间最主要的变化是Ph.D.员工的比例增加,伴随着First Degree员工比例的下降
主体段(3个):按照不同学位等级分成了三段,先写Master,特点是始终占比都最大,并且基本保持稳定。第二个主体段写First Degree,之前排名第二高,但是后来出现显著下降。第三个主体段写Ph.D.持有者,起初数据较小,后来出现理科博士比例的急剧上升。
【参考范文】:
The given pie charts illustrate the percentages of employees with different academic qualifications in an advertising company in 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that despite the level of degrees, the proportion of workers majoring in science was higher than that in arts, and the primary change in these years was the increase in the staff with doctorate degrees and a corresponding drop in those with a first degree.
Specifically, in both years, employees with a master’s degree constituted the largest share and the figures basically leveled off at about 30% (MSc) and 20%(MA) respectively.
As for those who had a first degree, their sum was the second highest in 1990 at 35% yet it plunged by 22% in 2010, especially the workers with an undergraduate degree of arts, whose proportion dropped from 15% to only 2%.
By contrast, Ph.D. holders accounted for an insignificant part at first with only 13% (Ph.D. of science) and 2% (Ph.D. of arts). However, the figure for the former rose sharply to 30% while that for the latter slightly to 5%, making them altogether rank the second position in 2010.
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【语言积累】:
illustrate v. 描述,描绘
academic qualification n. 学历
despite prep. 尽管
primary adj. 主要的,首要的
doctorate n. 博士学位
corresponding adj. 相应的
first degree/undergraduate degree n. 本科学历
specifically adv. 具体来看
constitute v. 组成,构成
account for 占据
level off 保持稳定
plunge v.急剧下降
insignificant adj 不显著的,微不足道的
former pron, (两者中的)前者;latter pron. (两者中的)后者
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