2022.06.04 17:23
2022年3月12日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:四个国家的年牛奶产量范文,供雅思考生参考。
点击查看》》》3月12日雅思写作task1题目回忆:不同年龄段人不同时间看电影。
【图形分类】
线图
【题目解析】
这个线图描写了2000年-2016年英国电影院上座率。图表中横坐标为时间,纵坐标为百分比,图例中式四个年龄组。
总体来说,四个年龄组都有上升趋势。
文章主体段可以分为两段,7-14和15-24为一组(段),25-35和35 and over为一组(段)。
【写作思路】
Para 1 = 题目改写 + 概述
Para 2 = 描写7-14和15-24的数据
Para 3 = 描写25-35和35 and over的数据
【参考范文】
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of people from various age groups who visited the cinema between 2000 and 2016 in the UK. Overall, cinemas attracted a rising percentage of the audience regardless of age, and the gap between these age groups had widened considerably by the end of this period.
In terms of 25-35-year-old people and those above 35, going to the movies was not popular in 2000, at around less than 3%. However, while the percentage of the former had climbed significantly to over 30% by 2016, that of the latter saw a steady climb, reaching some 12% in 2016.
Regarding the other two age groups, people between the ages of 15 and 24 had by far the highest attendance rate in 2000, starting at about 17%. However, the figure more than tripled to approximately 52% throughout the given stint, albeit a gradual increase over the first five years and wild fluctuations thereafter. Similarly, the percentage of young people from 7 to 14 also experienced a threefold rise, from 10% to over 30%, with slight and uneven changes before 2007 but a much more rapid growth after that.
(192 words)
【亮点词汇及短语】
1.various (adj.) 各种各样的
2.visit the cinema 看电影
3.attract (v.) 吸引
4.regardless of 不管
5.go to the movies 看电影
6.popular (adj.) 受欢迎的
7.climb significantly 剧烈上升
8.see a steady climb 逐渐上升
9.some (adv.) 大约
10.attendance rate 上座率
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