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4月16日雅思柱状图范文:1951到2011年小镇人口变化

2022.04.20 14:50

2022年4月16日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:1951到2011年小镇人口变化范文,供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

动态多图 – 柱状图

【题目解析】

题目大意:第一幅图展示了一个英国小镇1951-2011年人口变化,第二幅图展示了该小镇在同一时期不同年龄组人口百分比的变化情况。

题目有两幅图,故需要分为两段分别描写。同时,两幅图都是动态图,故需要考生充分利用动态图的句型。

第一幅图,总体趋势“先上升后下降”,描写简单;第二幅图0-14, 15-29和65+三个年龄组是上升趋势,10-39以及40-64称下降趋势,故主体第二段分为两个部分。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 概述

Para 2 = 描写第一幅图

Para 3 = 描写第二幅图

【参考范文】

The first bar chart illustrates how many people lived in a certain British town between 1951 and 2011, while the second depicts how the proportion of residents from five various age groups changed during the same period. Overall, there was an increase in the total population of this place, despite a downward trend in the percentage of 30-64-year-olds. 

In terms of the total population, the number was 100,000 in 1951. After that, it doubled, reaching 200,000 in 1991 before dropping slightly to approximately 175,000 in 2011. 

Turning to the percentage of people of different ages, those under 15 and those between 15 and 29 accounted for 15% each. Following this, the figures grew gradually to roughly 22% and 20% in 2011 respectively. Likewise, the proportion of senior citizens aged 65 and over also increased, but rapidly from 10% in 1951 to 25% in 2011. In contrast, 30-39-year-old people represented around 18% in 1951 and some 19% in 1971. However, the figure had almost halved to 12% by 2011. Although the percentage of 40-64-year-olds was by far the highest, at 45%, it dropped to just over 30% in 1991 and 20% in 2011.

(192 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.resident (n.) 居民

2.double (v.) 翻倍

3.account for 占据

4.roughly (adv.) 大约

5.senior citizens 老年人

6.represent (v.) 占据

7.halve (v.) 减半

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