2022.04.06 14:21
2022年3月3日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:澳大利亚周末和工作日照顾孩子时间范文,供雅思考生参考。
点击查看》》》3月3日雅思写作task1题目回忆:澳大利亚周末和工作日照顾孩子时间。
【图形分类】
柱状图
【题目解析】
2个柱状图对比了小孩子跟父母在一起的时间,分为周中和周末。
【写作思路】
开头段:转述题目
主体段:按周中和周末分开写小孩子由父母陪伴的时间情况;
总结:整体对比父母陪伴小孩子的时间(周中周末对比,父母对比)。
【参考范文】:
The bar charts compare how much time children below the age of 9 spend with their parents.
During weekdays, all these children enjoy less than 10 hours’ parental companionship, with those aged between 4 and 5 spending just above 8 hrs with parents. It is also evident that, for a large part of this time—about 4 to 6 hrs, only mothers keep these children company. For 1 to 2 hrs during the weekdays, children only have their dads around. Children aged from 6 to 9 are fortunate to have both parents with them for more than 2 hrs, whereas those below 6 years old only spend no more than 1 hour with both mom and dad.
On weekends, by contrast, at least 5 hrs are spent with both parents, particularly 4–5-year-olds who have 6 hrs with both parents’ companionship. Mothers still contribute 3 to 4 hrs of child-care on their own, while dads only spend an insignificant amount of time with their children alone, although 4–5-year-olds have up to 2 hrs with just their dads.
To sum up, though most of the time children are accompanied by mothers, they spend more time with parents on weekends, with fathers being more available.
(204 words)
【语言积累】
parental companionship 父母陪伴
it is evident that … 很明显…
a large part of 很大一部分
keep sb company 陪伴某人
have sb around 有某人陪伴
on one’s own 独自
an insignificant amount of 极其少量的
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