2022年3月19日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：好莱坞电影女性雇佣职位和变化范文，供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》3月19日雅思写作task1题目回忆:好莱坞电影女性雇佣职位和变化。

【图形分类】

表格题

【题目解析】

这个表格描述了1994年和2003年好莱坞女性在不同职业中的人数占比和变化情况。通过读图很容易看出这是一篇典型的动态表格，需要我们描述出不同职业在这十年中的占比变化。在这五个职业中，服装设计师，编辑和作家都是呈现增长趋势的，而制片人和导演呈现下降趋势，所以主体段可以按照增加和减少各分一段来进行描述。

【写作思路】

开头段：改写题目

综述段：不同职业女性的占比各不相同，有的增加，有的减少

主体段一：不同职业女性占比增加的变化情况 

主体段二：不同职业女性占比减少的变化情况

【参考范文】

The table shows the percentage changes of women with different employment positions in Hollywood between 1994 and 2003. 

In general, the percentages of women working in different jobs changed to varying degrees. Fashion designers, editors and writers experienced an increase in percentage change, while producers and directors witnessed a considerable decrease. 

The proportion of women working as fashion designers accounted for the highest among the five positions, climbing from 74.2% in 1994 to 76.1% in 2003 (a 2.5% percentage increase). By comparison, there was a slight increment from 11.4% to 14% in editorial jobs toward the end of the period, while the share of writers rose from 10% to 12%. Both jobs saw similar percentage increases over the decade, at 22.8% and 20% respectively. 

Women working as directors remained the lowest proportion of the decade, falling from 5% in 1994 to 3% in 2003. Meanwhile, the figure for female directors followed the same trend, decreasing from 15.6% to 10.3%. It is obvious that the percentage decreases for both positions over the decade were similar, contributing to 40% and 34% respectively.

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【语言积累】

1.percentage change 百分比变化

2.experience an increase 经历了…的增长

3.witness a considerable decrease 经历了…减少

4.account for 占比…

5.climbed slightly 略有上涨

6.there was a small increment 小幅增长

7.similar percentage increases 类似的比例增加

8.remained the lowest proportion 保持最小占比

9.followed the same trend 延续同样的趋势

10.percentage decreases 比例减少