2022.03.01 00:52
2022年1月15日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:度假者三年中对住宿的不同选择范文,供雅思考生参考。
点击查看》》》1月15日雅思写作task1题目回忆:度假者三年中对住宿的不同选择。
【图形分类】
饼状图
【题目解析】
3个饼图给出了度假的人对4种住宿方式的选择比例,并有3年的对比。
【3个饼图有时间的连续性,可以把4种住宿方式作为变量写出比例变化;或将3年的数据分别描写后,再做交叉对比。】
【写作思路】
开头段:转述题目
主体段:按3年的顺序描写几种住宿方式的比例变化;
总结:人们依然主要选择住在家人朋友家里;但租公寓这种住宿选择开始变多。
【参考范文】:
The pie charts compare the choices of accommodation when people took holidays in three separate years – 1988, 1998 and 2008.
In 1988, more than half (52%) of travelers chose to stay at their friends’ or family’s place, which was twice as many as the proportion of those who decided to camp outside, at 26%. The third preferable choice of accommodation turned out to be hotels which held 15% of tourists in this year. Only a small proportion (7%) of holiday makers tended to rent an apartment.
10 years later, staying with acquaintance remained as the main choice, whereas hotels and rented apartments attracted a higher proportion of travelers than in 1988, at 22% and 11% respectively. The percentage of campers had reduced by half.
This situation had obviously changed in 2008, when 22% of tourists accommodated themselves in a rented apartment, twice as much as the proportion of this group in 1998, while 44% lived with family members and friends, 10% lower than in 1998. Hotels and camping sites did not see any increase in their market share.
Overall, although a large percentage of travelers still preferred to stay with people they know, the choice of renting an apartment had attracted more holidaymakers over the two decades.
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【语言积累】
the third preferable choice 第三受欢迎的选择
turn out to be 被证明是…
acquaintance n. 熟人
remain as 保持是…
reduce by half 减半
market share 市场份额
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