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12月11日雅思线状图范文:3个国家看足球赛的人数对比

2022.02.20 18:18

2021年12月11日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:3个国家看足球赛的人数对比范文,供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

线状图

【题目解析】

线状图分别描述了从1980年到2004年三个国家观看顶级足球赛事的人数变化情况。题目的数据并不复杂,建议分别根据不同国家的观看人数进行趋势描述和对比分析。

【写作思路】

根据以上整理的信息,我们可以如下来布局全文:

开头段:转述题目;

主体第一段:描写意大利观看顶级足球赛事人数的整体下降趋势;

主体第二段:分别描写英国以及德国观看顶级足球赛事人数的整体上升趋势;

总结:强调三个国家观看顶级足球赛事人数的趋势对比;

注意:

1)描写不同国家观看顶级足球赛事人数的变化趋势之间注意过渡;

2)建议通过多种句式和表达的灵活应用来处理数据描述和趋势描写。

【参考范文】: 

The line graph describes the changes of the average attendance at top-level football competitions in three European nations during the period from 1980 to 2004.

According to the line graph, the average number of people attending top-level football matches in Italy was the highest in 1980, with a slight increase from 35 thousand to 37 thousand over the first six-year period. Thereafter, the following years witnessed a dramatic dip, with merely 25 thousand people present at the competitions in 2004, by which time Italy had been placed last, in terms of the average attendance at top-level football matches, among three nations.

By contrast, as can be seen from the line graph, although the data for England experienced a decreasing trend between 1980 and 1986, at 26 thousand in contrast to 22 thousand, there was a significant growth of as much as 12 thousand in the average number of English who attended top football competitions for the next eighteen years, overtaking that of Italians and occupying the first position in 2004. It is worth noting that the figure for Germans showed a similar trend, with the number dropping by 6 thousand in the first period and then gradually climbing by 14 thousand in the next three periods.

Overall, during the mentioned period, fewer Italians attended top-level football matches while more English and Germans were willing to be present.

(227 words)

【语言积累】

1.attendance (n.) 出席人数

2.witness (v.) 目睹

3.dip (n.) 下降

4.merely (adv.) 仅仅

5.overtake (v.) 超越

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