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2022年1月8雅思作文范文:高等教育是成功的最好途径吗

2022.01.17 16:36

2022年1月8日雅思写作考试已经结束啦,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:高等教育是成功的最好途径吗相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays, this is no longer true.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

教育类

【题目解析】

题目大意:有的人认为上大学是获得成功的最佳办法,而另一些人认为在现代社会已经不适用了。

这个题目属于"讨论类",要求考生讨论两个观点,并给出自己的个人观点。通常情况下,考生需要针对每一个观点的合理性进行讨论,并给出1-2个理由。

【写作思路】

Para 1 --- 改写题目 + 文章结构 + 个人观点

Para 2 --- 讨论第一个观点的合理性:大学文凭是找好工作和晋升的前提条件

Para 3 --- 讨论第二个观点的合理性:还有很多其他方法可以获得成功

Para 4 --- 总结 + 个人观点:大学文凭不是最好的获得成功的方法,可以使用其他方式。

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that individuals can never achieve success without a tertiary qualification, while others disagree, insisting that this is not applicable anymore in modern society. This essay will initially analyse the two ideas, before a presentation of my perspective, which is that attending university is not the most effective approach that can assist people to live a successful life and there are alternatives playing an important role.

It is justified for some to favour the larger contribution higher education makes to a person's success in life. The primary reason is that a university degree is the prerequisite for good employment and promotion. Nowadays, companies, be they well-known ones or start-ups, are inclined to recruit highly educated employees as they have acquired advanced knowledge and unique skill sets in their specialised fields and are considered to have the ability to add value to a corporation. If they stand out among their colleagues, they are very likely to be promoted even to management positions and well remunerated.

However, it is also true that receiving a university education is dispensable regarding helping people succeed. This is mainly because other ways are now available. The government is supporting the growth of new companies financially and thus individuals without a degree can become entrepreneurs and make money through running their own business. Creating vlogs is another option, and it is frequently noticed that many vloggers have earned fame and fortune. Also, many blue-collar workers such as plumbers in Australia can live a more affluent life than employees in the office, despite not being educated in university.

In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance, my firm opinion is that going to university is no longer the best method that people can rely on to become successful in life; after all, they can achieve this goal via many other different ways.

(314 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.achieve success 获得成功

2.a tertiary qualification 大学文凭

3.applicable (adj.) 适用的

4.attend university 上大学

5.assist (v.) 帮助

6.live a successful life 过上成功的生活

7.alternative (n.) 别的选择

8.play an important role 起重要作用

9.a university degree 大学文凭

10.prerequisite (n.) 前提

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