2021年12月4日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：15岁孩子做家庭作业时间和成绩对比范文，供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

静态柱图多图

【题目解析】

题目展示了2017年英国15岁男生和女生投入到完成家庭作业的时间以及他们最后的成绩。

第一幅图可以看出6小时及以下男生大于女生，至少7小时女生大于男生。

第二幅图可以看出获得A和B两个等级的女生比例高于男生，获得C、D和E三个等级的男生比例高于女生。

两幅图，故主体段需两段。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写+概述

Para 2 = 第一幅图数据

Para 3 = 第二幅图数据

【参考范文】

The two bar charts illustrate how many hours boys and girls aged 15 years old in the UK allocated to doing their homework and what grades they achieved in 2017. Overall, more boys spent no more than 6 hours finishing homework, while more girls distributed at least 7 hours; meanwhile, the percentage of girls who were graded A and B was higher, but more boys got other grades.

In the first chart, around 5% of boys and 3% of girls did not accomplish homework. Boys spending 1-2 hours and 3-4 hours constituted approximately 15% and 20% respectively, but girls represented roughly 13% and 18% separately. Noticeably, almost 40% of teenagers, regardless of genders, used 5-6 hours to do homework. In contrast, compared to 25% of girls allotting 7-14 hours to learning, the figure for boys was 20%. It took some 8% of girls and 2% of boys over 15 hours to finish homework.

Regarding the second chart, while approximately 8% of girls got A, only around 1% of boys had the same achievement. The figure for girls graded B was just over 40%, twicer higher than that for boys, at 20%. The percentage of boys and girls getting C was similar, at around 40%. Just under 40% of boys and around 15% of girls were categorised into the D group and there were very few students attaining the lowest grade.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.allocate … to …分配

2.distribute … to … 分配

3.grade (v.) 分级

4.accomplish (v.) 完成

5.constitute (v.) 占据

6.represent (v.) 占据

7.roughly (adv.) 大约

8.allot (v.) 分配