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2021年12月2雅思作文范文:是否该禁止商店售卖有害健康食物

2021.12.08 13:44

2021年12月2日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:是否该禁止商店售卖有害健康的食物相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that have been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意:应该禁止出售科学证明对人们健康有害的食物或饮品。

这个题目为"观点类题型",要求考生表达个人观点,可以是"完全同意"、"完全不同意"、"部分同意"或"部分不同意"。

这个可以如果观点为"同意",则要论证"为什么应该禁止出售科学证明对人们健康有害的食物或饮品",反之则论证"为什么不应该禁止出售科学证明对人们健康有害的食物或饮品"。

笔者的观点是"完全不同意"。

【写作思路】

Para 1 --- 改写题目 + 个人观点 + 理由

Para 2 --- 理由1:对商家造成经济影响

Para 3 --- 理由2:少量不会对人们身体造成伤害

Para 4 --- 总结:重申个人观点+总结两个理由

【参考范文】

It is argued that the availability of foods and drinks believed to be detrimental to individuals' health by scientists ought to be prohibited in shops. Personally, I totally disagree with this because negative influences will be exerted on relevant businesses and a proper amount of such food or drink will not cause damage to peoples' wellbeing.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that shop owners will bear great losses if unhealthy food or drink is banned. Although eating deep fried foods which are high in fat, such as chips and hamburgers, may cause obesity and cardiovascular diseases, they are still popular among the public, which brings sellers massive economic benefits. If selling such food is not allowed, there will be a considerable fall in the profits of businesses and even worse, speciality shops may go bankrupt. Similarly, bubble tea stores specialising in sugary drinks may also suffer economically.

Another important point I consider relevant is that people's health will not be adversely impacted if they do not consume an excessive amount. It is universally acknowledged that the human body is an advanced mechanism, with the ability to effectively process a certain amount of what people eat or drink, be it healthy or not. In other words, if people are exposed to junk food or alcohol just once a week, obviously there will be no adverse long-term harm to their health. Therefore, banning the so-called unhealthy food or drink seems unnecessary.

In conclusion, I strongly disapprove of banning the sales of food and drink that have been proved scientifically to damage people's health. After all, shops will experience financial crisis and the consumption of such food and drink within reasonable amounts will not place people's health at risk. Thus, the government should raise the public's awareness of keeping themselves fit, persuading them to control their frequency of consuming unhealthy food and drink rather than imposing a ban directly.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.detrimental (adj.) 有害的

2.prohibit (v.) 禁止

3.exert … influences on … 对…产生…影响

4.cause damage to 对…造成伤害

5.bear great losses 承受巨大损失

6.ban (v.) 禁止

7.obesity (n.) 肥胖

8.cardiovascular diseases 心血管疾病

9.massive economic benefits 巨大的经济利益

10.speciality shops 专卖店

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