2021年10月23日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：四个国家生产的电力对比范文，供雅思考生参考。

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【图形分类】

饼状图

【题目解析】

这四个饼图展示了四个国家在2003年至2008年间的电力来源情况。四个饼图分别代表四个国家，三种能源的占比情况一目了然很好描述，同学们可以快速对数据进行分组，即化石燃料，水能和核能各为一组，分别放在主体段落中；我们也很容易从这四个饼图看出印度和摩洛哥使用某种能源达到了极值。

【写作思路】

开头段： 改写题目

综述段： 印度和摩洛哥分别使用化石燃料和水能的占比非常高；摩洛哥和越南都没有使用核能发电。

主体段一： 描述化石燃料在四个国家发电的占比情况。

主体段二： 描述水能和核能在四个国家发电的占比情况。

【参考范文】

The pie charts compare the proportion of three different energy sources used to produce electricity in four countries over five years from 2003 to 2008.

Overall, India relied heavily on fossil fuel for power generation, while hydropower was the most popular source in Morocco. It is clear that all four countries utilized fossil fuel and hydropower, but Morocco and Vietnam did not apply nuclear power in producing electricity.

As can be seen from the pie charts, fossil fuel made up the largest proportion of total electricity manufactured in India, reaching as much as 82%. Following this country was Vietnam, where fossil fuel contributed to more than half of total energy consumption. By contrast, Sweden and Morocco had an extremely low rate of fossil fuel, at only 4% and 5% respectively.

Concerning Morocco, hydropower constituted 95% of the total power generation, against the lowest share 14% in India. Sweden and Vietnam used a similar proportion of hydropower, at 52% and 44% respectively. It is worth noting that only Sweden and India exploited nuclear power, but the proportion disparity was huge. The quantity of nuclear power in Sweden stood at 44%, while a mere 4% of this source was supplied for India.

(Word Count: 200)

【语言积累】

1.power generation 发电

2.apply 应用

3.manufacture 制造

4.reach as much as 高达

5.contribute to 导致了

6.energy consumption 能源消耗

7.constituted 构成

8.exploit 利用

9.proportion disparity 比例差距

10.be supplied for 提供…