2021年9月4日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1：比对男女雇员和他们孩子年龄范文，供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》9月4雅思写作task1题目回忆:比对男女雇员和他们孩子年龄

【图形分类】

柱状多图，静态图

【题目解析】

题目中两幅图，第一幅图描写了"英国2008年不同年龄段男女员工的比例"，第二幅图描写了"男女员工的最小孩子年龄的比例"。

两幅图分两段写，每段中都可以分两部分，即每个年龄组"男>女"和"女>男"。注意第二幅图中相同数据的描写。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写+概述

Para 2 = 描写第一幅图内容

Para 3 = 描写第二幅图内容

【参考范文】

The bar charts illustrate how many British males and females were in the workforce in 2008 and their youngest child's age. Overall, there were more 26-59-year-old female workers than males but more younger and older males than their female counterparts; meanwhile, male workers had more children aged from 6 to 21 than their female counterparts.

As for employees of different genders, the 16-25 group had 20% of males and around 14% of females. Roughly 65% of the British over 60 were employed, with males and females accounting for approximately 38% and 26% respectively. In contrast, while around 82% of 35-49-year-old females were employed, 78% of males had a job. Females in their fifties represented 80% and males constituted 70%. The percentage of 26-34-year-old females was 70%, slightly more than that of males, at about 65%.

Regarding the age of employees' youngest child, 60% of males and females had a child no older than five years old. While the figure for males whose youngest child was in the 6-10, 11-15 and 16-20 groups was the same, at 75%, that for females ranged from 55% to 65%. Males and females whose child were in their twenties took up around 70%.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.in the workforce 在工作中

2.account for 占据

3.represent 占据

4.constitute 占据

5.range from … to 在…区间

6.take up 占据