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2021年7月31日雅思写作task1作文:某校6个专业不同学生比例

2021.08.06 15:29

2021年7月31日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思作文的题目,各位考鸭们快来看看吧。

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*图形根据考场回忆,具体信息略有出入

【图形分类】

表格题

【题目解析】

表格呈现了澳大利亚一所大学各学系的招生情况,按照性别、母语、生源国度分类呈现,可以在以上维度分别进行大小比较和排序。

根据流程图信息,可以如下布局:

开头段:转述题目;

主体段:分别对三个分类中的数据进行介绍,重点当中多数情况,并指出例外情况;

综述段:概括三种分类之间,在数据上存在什么相似和差异之处。

【写作思路】

开头段:该表根据性别、第一语言和原籍国,对2011年某大学各系的学生招生统计数据进行了比较。

主体段1: 性别在招生中发挥了重要作用,因为大多数语言专业的学生是女性(约70%),而数学和化学系的学生则以男性为主(约85%)。不过,在历史和物理系更加平衡一些(接近50%)。

主体段2:另一方面,在大多数情况下,学生的母语似乎并不是招生的决定性因素,有38%到49%的学生被记录为非英语母语者。例外的是英语和现代语言系,只有12%和16%被归类为英语的第二语言使用者。

主体段3:理科系的澳大利亚学生和国际学生人数相近,这两个群体都占总数的50%左右。相比之下,与语言相关的研究领域主要由澳大利亚学生组成(接近80%)。

综述段:总的来说,大多数研究领域的学生人数都是多样化的,尽管与语言相关专业学生多为在澳大利亚出生的女性英语母语者。

【参考范文】

The table compares student enrolment statistics across departments in a university in 2011 according to gender, first language and country of origin.

Gender played a significant role in student intake, because the majority of language majors were comprised by females (around 70%) while math and chemistry departments were dominated by male students (around 85%). A greater degree of balance (close to 50%), on the other hand, can be observed in the history and physics departments.

On the other hand, the students' mother tongue did not seem to be a decisive factor in enrolment decisions in most cases, with 38% to 49% recorded as non-native speakers of English. The exceptions here were the English and modern languages departments, where only 12% and 16% were classified as second-language users of
 English.

The sciences departments featured similar numbers of Australian and international students, as both groups accounted for around 50% of the total. Language-related fields of study, in comparison, were primarily populated by Australians (close to 80%).

Overall, most areas of study were diverse in their student population, although language-related majors were typically female English natives born in Australia.

(187 words)

【语言积累】

1.student enrolment statistics 收生数据

2.country of origin 来源国家

3.student intake 招生情况

4.be dominated by 由…占主要地位

5.mother tongue 母语

6.a decisive factor in 决定性因素

7.enrolment decisions 招生决策

8.be primarily populated by 主要包含

9.diverse in student population 学生群体具备多样性

10.language-related majors 语言相关专业

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