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2021年6月17雅思task1范文:对比澳大利亚不同社交媒体用户年龄

2021.07.13 16:09

2021年6月17日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:对比澳大利亚不同社交媒体用户年龄相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

2021年6月17雅思task1范文:对比澳大利亚不同社交媒体用户年龄

点击查看》》》对比澳大利亚不同社交媒体用户年龄题目

【图形分类】

饼状图

【题目解析】

饼状图根据不同类别的社交媒体,描述了各个年龄组用户的分布情况。题目的数据并不复杂,除描述各个社交媒体的用户分布情况之外,也要对不同社交媒体进行联系和比较。

【写作思路】

根据以上整理的信息,我们可以如下来布局全文:

开头段:转述题目;

主体段:依次描述Facebook\YouTube\Twitter用户分布情况,重点强调18-34岁年龄组以及35-49岁年龄组用户占比较高;

总结:强调在各类社交媒体,18-34岁年龄组以及35-49岁年龄组用户均占比较高,65+岁年龄组用户均占比较低;

注意:

1)描写不同社交媒体的用户分布情况之间注意过渡;

2)建议通过多种句式和表达的灵活应用来处理数据描述和数据对比。

【参考范文】:

The pie charts compare user distribution patterns based on three different social media in Australia in 2011.

According to the diagram, in terms of Facebook, users aged between 18 and 34 occupied the largest proportion, at up to 29%, followed by subscribers in the age group of 35-49, reaching 28%. The figures for the other age groups were relatively lower, among which senior users at the age of 65 and over constituted the least share (merely 10%).

A similar pattern can be seen among YouTube users, with 30% aged between 18 and 34 and 26% aged between 35 and 49, ranking first and second among all the age categories. The data for the age group of 10-17 was roughly similar to that for the age group of 50-64 and 65+ as combined together.

As to the Twitter user distribution, the largest percentage belonged to the middle-aged group, with 40% of users being 35-49, a bit higher than that of users at the age of 18-34 (29%). Although only a small part of Twitter subscribers were in the 50-64 age bracket, senior users aged over 65 were still ranked last.

Overall, the young and middle-aged were the main components of social media users, while the elders showed little interest.

(208 words)

【语言积累】

1.distribution (n.) 分布

2.pattern (n.) 模式

3.subscriber (n.) 订阅者

4.relatively (adv.) 相对地

5.constitute (v.) 组成

6.category (n.) 分类

7.roughly (adv.) 粗略地

8.bracket (n.) (价格、年龄、收入等的)组级,等级

9.component (n.) 组成部分

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