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2021年5月15日雅思task1范文:4个美国工厂生产一辆车花费时间

2021.05.25 14:31

2021年5月15日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:4个美国工厂生产一辆车花费时间情况以及相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

2021年5月15日雅思作文:4个美国工厂生产一辆车花费时间

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【题目解析】

图形给出了4个美国汽车厂商平均车辆生产的用时变化。

【写作思路】

开头段:转述题目

主体段一:GM的生产效率逐年稳步提高,平均生产车辆的时间从1998年的32hr/辆下降到2005年的22hr/辆。

主体段二:Ford虽然前三年生产时间变长,但在2001年之后效率提高。到2005年,平均生产时间下降到21小时。

主体段三:Toyota和Honda工厂的生产时间一直较短,尽管期间有较大的波动,两个公司的美国工厂也少量的减少了平均生产时间。

总结:虽然两个日本车企的总体生产效率要高一些,但两个美国车企在这期间缩小了差距。

【参考范文】

The line graph compares the changes in the average hours needed to manufacture a vehicle by four companies – General Motor, Ford, Toyota and Honda – at their producing sites in the US between 1998 and 2005.

It is clear that GM had successfully improved their productivity, with the average time reducing from 32 hours per vehicle to 22 hours during the given period, although the figure remained the highest among the four producers. In Ford's factories, there was an initial increase in the figure from 28 hours to over 30 until 2001, after which the factories started to achieve higher efficiency. By 2005, the time needed to produce a car had descended to just 21 hours.

In terms of Toyota and Honda, both manufacturers kept their average production time at a low level between 20 and 24 hours per car, maintaining higher productivity than the other two competitors. Despite wild fluctuations throughout the whole period, factories of both Toyota and Honda managed to slightly reduce the average time.

Overall, while the two Japanese car companies produced vehicles more quickly in general, the two US manufacturers had narrowed the gap remarkably.

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【语言积累】

1.successfully improved their productivity 成功的提高了生产力

2.remained the highest 保持最高

3.an initial increase 一开始的增长

4.achieve higher efficiency 实现更高效率

5.after which … 在那之后

6.descend v. 下降

7.average production time 平均生产时间

8.narrow the gap 缩小差距

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