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  Question 2

  In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries,nowadays skills. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Key words analysis

  • making their own clothes : 自己做衣服

  • doing repairs to things : 修理一些物品

  • situation: 情况

  Argument:

  • 这是属于议论文中的problem的类型,通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案

  Possible reasons :

  • 现在比以前更容易买到物品

  • 买到的东西更加好看,人们更愿意去买

  • 现代人没有那么多时间去自己手工做一些东西

  Model Essay 1 – Part 1

  Introduction

  In the past, many people had practical skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. But nowadays in many countries, skills like these are disappearing.

  Main body 1

  In my country, it is a serious situation. I remember when I was little boy, my parent seldom purchased cloth from store for me, instead, my mother made cloth by hands for me. I also remember that my father went to repair our furniture and bicycles, and sometimes went to replace broken class of window. Nowadays, I can't find anyone who wears cloth making by hands. I can still find sewing machine in some families, but nobody use it. It is just a decoration of house. People usually go to store to purchase their favorite clothes. It’s harder and harder to find a shop to repair bicycles. Actually, less people ride bicycle, instead, more and more people driving. So, practical skills of living are really disappearing.

  Model Essay 1 – Part 2

  Main body 2

  Why this change is happening? As I considering, there are some reasons, including following points. Firstly, with the development of society and economy, there are plenty productions of living, also more and more store were built. It's convenient for people to purchase cloth or something. People needn't make cloth by hand anymore. Secondly, People's concepts were changed. People choose something not only for practical but also for good looking. In addition, in people’s spare time, more and more people choose to sport instead of doing house work. People like to enjoy their life. Moreover, some people don't have these practical skills because there aren't chances for them to practice.

  Conclusion

  In conclusion, I think in the past people are more likely to do repair things or practical things, and the reasons are above.


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