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雅思口语解析:A Local Improvement

2017.06.02 16:02

  新东方在线雅思网为大家带来了雅思口语解析:A Local Improvement。希望以下内容能够为同学们的雅思备考提供帮助。新东方在线雅思网将第一时间为大家发布最新、最全、最专业的雅思报名官网消息和雅思考试真题及解析,供大家参考。

  Describe a change that will improve the local area

  you should say:

  What it is

  How it may work

  What kinds of problems the change may solve

  and explain how you feel about the change

  热度分析:

  改变类话题是雅思常考的,包括自己的改变,别人的改变,地区的改变,文化的改变等经常结合Part1 和Part3一起考

  叙述误区:

  1.时态:改变题经常考已经发生的改变,要描述从过去到现在的改变本题是描述现在到将来的变化,需要运用将来时

  2.思路:改变题可以遵循:现状, 问题, 成因, 解决(个人、政府、社会各界), 好处 这样一个逻辑顺序

  语言点提示:

  improve/change, enhance, encourage, turn, alter

  解决问题:solve, deal with, cope with, tackle, correct

  好处:benefit, positive influence, help, reward, profit

  可以这么说:

  A couple of weeks ago, I read a news from BBC, titled “working out on a regular basis can buy us 5 more years”. It says, latest study shows that doing moderate exercise regularly can effectively reduce the risk of various diseases and bring people a longer life expectancy.

  Personally, I am strongly in favor of this. And to encourage more people living a higher life style, I do hope that our local government could invest in infrastructure, especially building more gyms & indoor fitness centers in residential areas. Then, it would be more likely for us to go there to work out on a regular basis. Coz’, you know, now serious smog problem makes the public in China doubt about the safety of outdoor activity.

  We really need more indoor fitness facilities. Coz’ Can you imagine how frustrated I am, when I make up mind to start my working-out plan, but the nearest gym or fitness club I could find is like 30-minute drive away from my flat.

  Actually, I am not alone. Meanwhile in the city, most urban population is either collapsing in front of the screen of TV, PC, smart phone, or fully occupied with heavy workload. Consequently, quite a few of us would spend an hour a day, 3 days a week in doing some moderate sports. Due to this situation, an increasing number of citizens in my hometown are facing the problems of overweight, obesity even heart disease. With the measure I suggest about constructing more indoor body-building clubs & facilities, I’m positive those health problems would soon be curb & tackle.

  Also, I do suggest those gym or fitness club would open up to the locals with a reasonable & affordable price, and this would produce more opportunities for people who are earning a living wages to join with others to keep fit & build body. For basically in my home city, cost for applying the membership of a fitness center can be staggeringly high.

  I would love to see this happens some day in the future and with a healthier population, it would be more likely to secure a good future for our community.


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