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雅思写作小作文柱状图解析及范文:服务产业的GDP

2016.10.02 11:44

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  Task:GDP from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

雅思写作小作文柱状图解析及范文:服务产业的GDP

  思路解析:

  1. 采用折线写法,重点描述数据的改变和趋势。

  2. 注意一类数据的描述(起点,终点,交点,最高点,最低点)。

  3. 注意描述线段的时候采用动作+程度的方式进行。

  4. 分段原则为:每条线自成一段,即IT一段,Service一段。

  5. 注意共性的描述:例如. 两者都在增长,且IT总是高于Service。

  参考范文:

  The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of GDP, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout this time.

  In 1992, the data of IT was nearly 7%, much higher than that of Service. It then went up steadily to a little above 8% until 1994, when it began to decline. The next 2 years saw a slow decrease to 7.5%, followed by a sharp rise to 12% by 1998. Since then, the percentage of IT continued to soar and ended up with peaking at 15% by 2000, almost twice as high as Service industry.

  The pattern of Service was different. During the first half period between 1992 and 1996, there was a steep increase to 7%, which was the closest to the level of IT industry in the same year. After that, this number began to remain stable and reached over 8% by 2000. Generally, the proportion of Service industry doubled in the past 8 years.

  In conclusion, both IT and Service Industry played even-increasingly important roles in the contribution to GDP of UK. The percentage of IT went through a small fluctuation, while the number of Service had a straight rise.

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