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　　1第一个例子：

　　这个是一个学生让我看的几个自己写的口语素材-(1)

　　Q：What place do you like to visit most?

　　A：I prefer to visit bj happy valley, which is the most famous amusement park in China.and it doesn't cost too much. I spend nearly every holiday to visit in this place.

　　我就想说：这些句子写的都非常的生硬，生搬硬套一些语法出来，而且至少在最后要懂得用一个so，这样的逻辑词，都跑到哪里去了?

　　所以：我按照原文意思修改了一下

　　Well, Beijing Happy Valley, I guess, you know, one of the most famous amusement parks in China, it’s a fascinating place for us, and we can never get bored hanging around there, besides, it’s affordable, so I go there a lot.---【在尽量不改变原意基础上的修改!大家记住，不要无谓的随便使用从句，原素材当中的从句就非常不好!】

　　2第二个例子：

　　这个是一个学生让我看的几个自己写的口语素材-(2)

　　Q：Why do you like to go there?

　　A：Because there are always numbers of foreign restaurant snack round the park, which also show different snacks out doors,such as baguette and croissant. and I always hang out in a restaurant with my classmates after we leave the BJ Happy Valley.

　　我就想说：这几句话，根本就不知道考生在说什么!!!

　　numbers of 用词错误

　　foreign restaurant snacks 用词错误

　　out doors 用词错误

　　这么多错误，考官怎么听啊!

　　所以：我按照原文意思修改了一下

　　I guess those nicely decorated restaurants dotted around Happy Valley are the reasons why I come around here this often, and not only can they create nice atmosphere, but they can provide some tasty snacks, like some baguettes and croissants, you know what, we can grab one or two of them for free, so it’s pretty nice, right?

　　nicely decorated：装修很好的

　　dotted around：零散的落户着几家

　　come around：来这儿-【很地道的说法】

　　grab one or two of them：这个grab就很地道了!