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2015.12.09 11:45

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  【教育类】

  Nowadays,most people learn academic study in university, but others think

  we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

  如今,多数人在大学学习,但是,有人以为我们应该学习更多的职业技艺,能否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考题)

  【标题解析】本题为经典教育话题改写:能够了解为职业教育比照综合教育,或者专才教育比照通才教育。

  【相关话题】

  【教育类】

  In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education

  across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of

  subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world.

  在一些国度,中学生会学习普遍的课程,在一些国度,学生们会学习一些和将来择业相关的课程,哪一种教育方式愈加适宜?

  【谋篇规划】(退让反驳)

  首段:背景引见+争议焦点+作家立场

  二段:退让原题观念的合理性

  三段:反驳原题观念的不合理

  尾段:再次亮明观念+总结理由

  【思绪拓展】

  【职业教育的利好】

  1. 人们的精神和时间有限,普遍涉猎,难免走马观花。相反,集中精神学习一门课技艺,可使人成为一个范畴的专家。

  人生的斗争的过程就是追求稀缺的过程,你要成为那个不可替代者。

  2. 职业培训学校培育的学生, 择业更有竞争力,由于他们能够合适特殊企业的需求。

  【大学教育的利好】

  1. 通才教育协助人完成全面开展,培育多元的兴味和才气,能够使受教育者顺应将来不同范畴的工作,因而,能够减少单一职业选择带来的失业风险。

  2.

  职业教育通常传授的是以择业为导向的学问,和就业相关联的技艺,仅是一种生存技艺的培育,相反,通才教育不只是传授学问,还触及到人的道德教育、性格培育、心灵生长,因而,专才教育更能表现圆满教育的真理。

  【范文赏析】

  【首段】背景引见 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education,

  many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However,people’s views differ

  greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my

  opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.

  【二段】 学习职业技艺的利好

  Granted,those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never

  without their reasons. First,zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners

  secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be

  greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job

  candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they

  have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also,Jack-of-all-trades is

  master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of

  subjects,specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd

  considering that one’s time and energy is limited

  【三段】承受大学教育的利好:

  What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense

  value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who

  receive university education have plenty of room for career development because

  they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping

  one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall

  development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of

  colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can

  train more comprehensive talents for a country,which will inject new life into

  the further development of a nation.

  【尾段】亮明立场

  Overall,my stand is that compared with attending vocational training

  schools,receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it

  helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal

  talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.

  【全文点评】

  本篇主题明白、行文顺畅、逻辑明晰、文风朴素、偶以亮点词汇装点,可为考生赏析之佳作。小鹏哥原创范文只是雅思写作之一种,文无定法,倡议童鞋打造属于本人的个性范文。2016年雅思有可能开端机考,很多童鞋报考学校的写作分数也有请求进步的趋向,唯有增强练笔,考试才干才高自现。

  【经典语料】

  1. generalist n通才

  2. specialist n专才

  3. specialized education n专才教育

  4. comprehensive education n通才教育

  5. vocational training school n 职业培训学校

  6. higher education = high education n 高等教育

  7. acquire a range of subjects v 学习普遍的课程

  8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 畅游学问的海洋

  9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 防止潜在的失业的风险

  10. Knowledge is not a burden 艺多不要身

  11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v为将来事业的应战做好充沛准备

  12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in

  different fields in the future 学习普遍的课程能够协助一个人为将来不同范畴的工作做好准备

  13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到面子的有出路的工作

  14. excel in one specific field v 通晓于一个特殊的范畴

  15. realize his or her all-round development. v完成全面的开展

  16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career

  choice v面对单一职业选择带来的失业的风险

  17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 愈加可行和理性

  18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v

  进步将来择业的竞争力

  19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 样样通晓,就是一无所精。

  20. inject new life into the further development of a nation

  v给一个国度的开展注入新颖生机

  作者介绍:

  新东方网专栏作家:薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思7.5分,托福29分)。

  爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。

  大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

  对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

  教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)

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