2024.12.19 14:01
2025考研英语(一)大作文终极预测1
摘自《2025考研英语高分写作考前预测20篇》(王江涛编著,群言出版社)
一、材料作文:人工智能
可仿写电脑、网络、手机、人与科技
Directions:
Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you should explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your argument with reasons and relevant examples.
Write your answer in about 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
Changing technology stimulates the brain and increase intelligence. But that may only be true if the technology challenges us. In a world run by intelligent machines, our lives could get a lot simpler. Would that make us less intelligent? Artificial intelligence is taking over many human jobs. In the future, the electronic assistant will develop to the point that it serves similar functions as a real living butler, fulfilling requests such as:“Organize a dinner party for six on Thursday, Jeeves, and invite the usual guests.” At that point, our long struggle with challenging technologies is at an end. Like Bertie Wooster, we can take it easy knowing that the hard work of planning and organizing is being done by a better brain-the electronic assistant. Starved of mental effort, our brains will regress.
预测范文
Currently,great achievements have been made in the field of?artificial intelligence, which is taking over a good many human jobs. In the excerpt, the author assumes that since artificial intelligence can plan and organize for us, our brains will regress. Nevertheless, I disagree with the author’s opinion.
I cling to the idea that our world won’t be like some science-fiction scenes where human brains are inferior, even if intelligent machines are getting increasingly smarter. To begin with, no matter how superior,artificial intelligence needs us just as much as we need it. It requires our supplies and repairs, hence our brains are going to catch up with the artificial intelligence. What is more, interactions between humans can never be replaced by machines. For intelligent machines, it is unlikely to develop human-like social competence which consumes a great deal of brain work.
After all, with the development of artificial intelligence, human brains are also evolving.
参考译文:
目前,人工智能领域取得了巨大成就,人工智能正在接管很多人类所从事的工作。在这篇选段中,作者认为我们的大脑会退化,因为人工智能会为我们计划和组织工作。然而,我不赞同作者的观点。我坚持认为,尽管智能机器正在变得越来越智能化,但我们的世界不会像科幻小说的场景那样:在那些场景中,人脑比不上智能机器。首先,不管人工智能有多高级,它对我们的需要跟我们对它的需要一样多。人工智能需要我们的补给和修理,因而我们的大脑将会跟上人工智能的步伐。其次,机器永远不可能替代人与人之间的互动。对于智能机器来说,发展出像人类一样的社交能力是不太可能的,这需要耗费大量的脑力劳动。毕竟,随着人工智能的发展,人类的大脑也在逐渐发展。
亮点词汇:
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佳句拓展:
1、While their high earnings have provoked fierce criticism from some of the conservative public, I fully support this up-to-date online education for two main reasons.?
尽管他们的高收入引起了一些保守公众的激烈批评,但基于两点原因,我完全支持这一最新的在线教育。
2、In my viewpoint, such an attempt to bridle the overuse of cell phones among students
is a sensible way to help students shun their drawbacks.?
在我看来,这种克服学生中过度使用手机的尝试,是帮助学生避开危害的合理方式。
3、As for me, I don’t agree with the opinion that computers can take the place of human teachers.?
对我而言,我不同意电脑能够取代人类老师这一观点。
道长点评:
材料作文是2023年考研大纲新增的大作文题型,写作方法分为四个步骤,一是仔细审题、分析材料,约2分钟;二是列出提纲、确定布局,约3分钟;三是正式写作,约25分钟;四是检查优化,约5分钟。审题时,首先需要找出材料的主题词或主题句,即材料给出的关键信息。分清什么是主要信息,什么是次要信息。
另外,考生必须完成题目中的两项任务:解释你是否或在何种程度上同意作者的观点,同时用原因和相关的例子来支持你的论证。换而言之,既要概括材料中的信息,又要明确给出自己的观点。作答时可选择任意一方观点,论证有理有据即可。