2016考研考后，2016考生对答案估分可以早点做下一步准备，而2017考生关注考题及老师解析可以洞悉科目命题趋势，让备考更有方向感，下面是新东方在线名师王江涛老师对2016考研英语一的命题解析及范文参考，大家看看。

新东方在线/王江涛

　　英语(二)

　　PART A

　　Directions:

　　Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend, Jack, wrote an Email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation. Write him a reply to

　　1) thank him,

　　2) give your advice.

　　You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　【命题解析】

　　继2007、2008、2009、2011英语(二)、2012英语(一)、2014英语(一)之后，2016年英语(二)第七次考察了建议信这种考研写作最重要书信，体现了强烈的反押题倾向，也再次验证了真题在考研写作命题中至高无上的价值!

　　在北京新东方面授、新东方在线网课及《考研英语高分写作》等各类书籍中，笔者均反复讲解了建议信的写作方法，并提供了大量真题及预测范文。考生如果认真学习过，应该感觉并不难写。

　　《2016考研英语高分写作》第27页讲解了书信类写作格式，39页讲解了建议信写作方法，45、47、49、56、57和64页详解了六篇建议信真题，77、86页提供了三篇建议信预测范文。《2016王江涛考研英语满分范文背诵》第17和37页提供了两篇建议信预测范文，223、226、237页提供了三篇建议信真题范文。

　　《2016王江涛考研英语(二)满分写作》第50和77页提供了建议信预测范文和写作框架。《2016考研英语(二)高分写作终极预测20篇》10页和30页也提供了建议信预测范文和写作框架。《考研英语高分写作素材大全》第184、187、189、199、200、208页讲解了建议信真题范文。诸多表达均可使用。

　　本题首段应对朋友的祝贺表示感谢，并表明写作目的：关于如何学好翻译提出自己的建议。第二段应提出两至三点具体建议：端正目的、博览群书、勤于实践等等。尾段可再次表明目的并期待回信。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Jack,

　　Thanks for your congratulation! Since you asked for advice on translation, I’d like to offer several conducive proposals as follows.

　　First of all, while quite a number of students think they’re forced to learn translation——merely for English test, you should learn it for some other purposes like the usefulness other than examination itself. What is more, for purpose of becoming an outstanding translator, it is vital to not only appreciate the beauty and perfection of the language and literature in both English and Chinese, but also arouse your great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.

　　I’m sure you’ll be an excellent translator. Looking forward to your reply!

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　PART B

　　Directions:

　　Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

　　1)interpret the chart, and

　　2)give your comments.

　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

　　【命题解析】

　　2016年英语(二)大作文继2015年之后连续第二年考察饼状图，同时，继2005年MBA写作“十一黄金周”、2011年英语(一)“旅程之余“之后，避开当年传统文化、网上购物、环境保护等大热门话题，而是第三次考察”旅游“这一次热门话题。体现了考研写作命题明显的反押题倾向，也表明了真题在考研写作命题中至高无上的地位!

　　在北京新东方面授、新东方在线网课及《考研英语高分写作》等各类书籍中，笔者均反复讲解了旅游类作文的写作方法，并提供了大量真题及预测范文。考生如果认真学习过，应该感觉并不难写。

　　《2016考研英语高分写作》第142页详细讲解了旅游真题，233页提供了旅游类预测图表作文。值得一提的是，162页和172页分别提供了关于读书和压力的两篇预测范文，正好可以写本图中两点重要原因：欣赏美景和缓解压力，本文中第二段即来自于上述两篇范文。

　　《2016王江涛考研英语满分范文背诵》第220和97页分别提供了旅游类真题及预测范文。《2016考研英语(二)高分写作终极预测20篇》56页提供了旅游类预测范文。《2016王江涛考研英语(二)满分写作》第102页提供了旅游类预测图表作文。《考研英语高分写作素材大全》第48-49页提供了海量旅游类素材。诸多表达均可使用。

　　本文首段应该简要描述图表，首句进行总体描述：主题(旅游目的)+对象(某高校学生)，接着进行细节描述，主要描述占比最大的两个目的(欣赏美景和缓解压力)。第二段进行因果论证，重点阐释两点原因：欣赏美景与缓解压力。尾段可进行预测趋势、归纳结论或提出建议措施。

　　【参考范文】

　　This pie chart clearly illustrates the purposes of students’ touring in a certain university. As is reflected by the diagram, 37 percent of college students travel in a bid to appreciating the scenery, next comes the aim of relieving pressure, accounting for 33% percent. By contrast, the percentage of students travelling aiming at others, making friends and cultivating independence account for 15%, 9% and 6% respectively.

　　Several primary factors could contribute to this phenomenon. In the first place, travel can offer us a wide range of experiences. In travelling, we may join tourists marveling at the incredible power of Niagara Falls, mingle with the happy throngs strolling in the Paris boulevards and experience the bitterness and joy of people on different lands and in different times. In the second place, college students, who have to juggle academic work, romantic relationships and a busy social calendar, are particularly susceptible to pressure. By touring, they can successfully manage and reduce stress.

　　Taking all these factors into consideration, we may predict that with the quickening pace of campus life and ever-increasing pressure, the number of university students touring will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.