2011考研英语二小作文真题范文及解析
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2011考研英语二小作文真题范文及解析

  Direction: Suppose your cousin, Liming, has just been admitted to a university, write him/her a letter to

  1) congratulate him/her, and

  2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.

  Your should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2.

  Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.

  Do not write the address. (10 points)

  参考范文

  Dear Li Ming,

  Congratulations on your admittance to the University you have dreamed about! I’m absolutely delighted to learn that you have just been admitted to Stanford University. I know there was fierce competition this year but your diligence and perseverance definitely paid off.

  I’d like to offer you several proposals on how to prepare for your university life. Above all, I do recommend you to take advantage of the library in your university by reading books beside the normal curriculum. In addition, I believe that you may spare your free-time for three main activities: building your body, expanding your knowledge, and communicating with friends and family.

  I wish you further success in future and hope you will invite me to your graduation ceremony four years later.

  Yours faithfully,

  Zhang Wei

  范文分析:

  本文首先书信格式完整、正确。段落安排合理,层次清楚,内容连贯,使用了Above all, In addition 等引导文章开展,符合英文书信写作套路。第一段开门见山,向朋友提出祝贺,以及祝贺的理由。第二段从课外学习和生活两个角度对大学生活提出建议。最后,祝贺对方在未来阶段获得更大的成就。另外,本文语言自然流畅,句式和用词都相对丰富多样。因为是给同辈亲戚写信,因此文中适当使用了祈使句和缩写。符合私人信函的语域。很好的完成了写作任务。



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