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2007考研英语小作文真题范文及解析
Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【参考范文】
To Whom It May Concern,
I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some better suggestions for you.
Firstly, it would be greatly appreciated if you could prolong the time for reading, because in the daytime, most of the students are having classes, and they cannot come to the library. Moreover, since some of the books on shelves are out of date, it is advisable for you to provide us with some new books, such as the latest magazines.
I hope that you will find the above suggestions practical.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【真题解析】
首先就审题而言,诸考生们需要掌握应用文题型的审题技巧,以更快、更有效地掌握关键信息,节约做题时间。
1. 常规性规定部分
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
本部分规定的内容与前两年的规定内容基本一致。对于此部分,考生们只需在审题时关注一个内容即可,即应用文的署名。本题中规定为“Li Ming”,而这也是应用文考查历史中经常使用的署名规定内容。
2. 规定情景部分
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
本年的应用文中,规定情景部分较短,这也体现出了英语一小作文的命题特点,越来越简练,而给学生更多的发挥和写作空间,结果就是题目难度更高了。一般而言,对于此部分,考生们需要从中抓取四个关键信息:应用文类型、书信类型(如果应用文类型为书信)、收信人、应用文内容。
(1)应用文类型
就近十几年的应用文考查历史来看,应用文的考查类型基本分为两种:书信和通知。本题中,明确出现了letter这一个关键词,可确定本题要求书写的应用文类型为书信。
(2)书信类型
本题中,明确含有两个关键词:suggestions,可初步判断书信类型为建议信;其次,再结合此部分的内容(建议大学图书馆提高其服务质量)来看,说明可确定本题要求写的书信类型确实为建议信。
(3)收信人
本题的规定情景部分中,明确说明“to your university library”,也就是说收信人为大学图书馆。根据之前所写文章中收信人的格式使用情况,对于收信人,本题中并不知收信人为何人,故而本题中收信人可用“To Whom It May Concern,”。
(4)应用文内容
本题中规定书信内容为:making suggestions for improving its service,即建议图书馆提高服务质量。
其次,在已知本题规定写作类型为建议信后,根据之前文章中所解析的建议请信的写作方法,再结合本题的内容要求,本应用文内容可为:
自我介绍,表示相关,表扬在先,建议在后;
具体建议,附加原因;
表示期待。