在这个阶段，夯实基础是不变的话题，夯实基础也就是夯实英语学习中最基本的成分。今天老师以一篇考生的作文为例，进行点评，希望大家从一个个错误中也达到夯实基础的作用，逐步过渡到对整体文章的把握。
As is depicted in the picture, there are three pencils of the same direction but the other one is in the opposite direction. Just as the words under the picture read, that not be afraid to different.
The picture reflects a philosophy in our life : a famous star wearing a appealing design show on the TV, then this design are prevailed in the market. For the sake of seeking fashion, people wearing the same suit walk on the street. As the society keeps progressing , this phenomenon not only appear wearing ,but also turn up every social areas. However, what the people don’t realize is that unity everything will result in normal thoughts. If each individual expresses the same imagination, the society would not exist diversity. Evidently, this phenomenon hinder the development of society.
For my part, it is imperative that all of us join in the efforts to combat this phenomenon. As to me , I would do my utmost to cultivate the habit of independent thought .
批注：
1、把逗号去掉，that后接句子，don’t be afraid to be different. different是形容词，前边加be动词。
2、an，注意定冠词和不定冠词的用法区别。
3、这里作为动词，前边主语是a star, 谓语得用单三形式，包括show要加s;are要变为is。
4、形容词形式，流行的，ing形式。
5、图片反应的哲学思想，应该是概括的内容，而这里的这句话过于细节。也就是说在这换一句概括，这句话可以作为一个例证证明论点。
6、错误同3，这句话主语是this phenomenon是单数，所以appear和turn要加s。
7、加in aspect of，这种现象不仅出现在服装方面。
8、加in，任何方面的一致性，unity in everything。
9、单数，每一every后边跟名词单数，所以areas的s要去掉。
10、Diversity would not exist in the society.注意中式思维尽量避免中式英语。
鉴于以上学生的作文，可以把基础提高一下，可以巩固一下简单的语法知识，如果水平可以的话就没有必要了，视自己的情况进行。写作这块，可以多多研究一些优秀作文，从文章框架上，即每段写得大概内容上研究。可以背诵一些。尽量在内容上有自己的东西，不要大范围的搬来用，可以就不同话题仿写句子进一步优化形成属于自己的写作段落分布模式和自己的特色的句子。
希望大家新年新气象，以饱满的热情和踏实的态度准备2016考研，预祝各位考生金榜题名!